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Crush On : Perhaps Fang
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PostSubject: Mooring   Thu Jun 28, 2012 2:54 pm

This is an apology to the one I love for my rash actions.


Mooring

In the darkest nights

A lonely ship sails

Battered by monstrous waves

And struggled with a splinting hull.

Its sails are tattered

Its rudder a narrow nub

But up ahead a glimmer

A home where it longs to halt.

So will you let it moor

And be safe in these calm waters

And forgive it

For all the times it has gone astray

For now after so long

It has found its way

Back to a safe mooring

A place it call its home


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PostSubject: Re: Mooring   Thu Jun 28, 2012 3:46 pm

This is way better than my poems. But I'll have some stuff to say:

Forgive is not spaced out. Razz You taught me a new word. (mooring) You used "its" correctly. Smile

Other than that, I don't really have anything to say. xD
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PostSubject: Re: Mooring   Thu Jun 28, 2012 8:19 pm

Hehe thanks, just fixed it.
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PostSubject: Re: Mooring   Thu Jun 28, 2012 10:25 pm

Very nice, I'm sure you are forgiven Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Mooring   Thu Jun 28, 2012 10:30 pm

Thank you Brook, I hope I am.
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